framed, a poem

Hey you!

Look at what I see

and do!

You look at me

and I look at you!

I go here

and you go there.

Whose life is better?

I bet we can prove it!

You post yours

and I post mine,

count the reaction

and then regroup!


Hey you!

Look at what I see

and do!

You look at me

and I look at you!

Let's share our experiences

and see who's better!

You do that

and I do this!

You capture your moment

and I capture mine!

You ask if I saw yours

and I'll ask

if you saw mine!


Hey you!

Look at what I see

and do!

You look at me

and I look at you!

You hide this

and I hide that!

You manufacture something

and I'll frame fraudulence!

Double tapping make believe

hoping we can really

make believe.


Hey you!

Look at what I see

and do!

You look at me

and I look at you!


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